Perspective Study:
Building Section:
Hines Elevations:
Pru Center Elevation:
Boylson Street Elevation:
Roof Level:
Third Level:
Second Level:
Gound Level:
Site AnalysisFinal Intensive Review Comments:
Having hard time understanding plan.
What is your topic? Clarify
Explore degree of building intervention
- 2 circles?
- wrapper?
- oval?
- How they are treated through facade?
Wonderfully "machine like".
Lots of stripes - does that reveal duel logic of structure?
Show street context in plans.
Changeability of the space.
Like urban gesture within site: unequal void spaces.
Do more with dimension of wrapper.
Infill with ramp.
Balcony use?
New base of Pru Center.
Two ramps - the nature of the ramps as bridges.
Entry terminate in between spaces?
Multiple connections.
Access to roof.
Enter off spine.
Model was a good tool for understanding.
What is happening street side?
Push the entrance.
Geometry and scale works.
How does it integrate in the back?
Drawings hard to understand.
Mercedes Museum, Stuttgart
4 comments:
Mark,
To help you sift through the many comments, start with clarifying your concept. Your site analysis can be expanded to contain specific elements that help to set up your concept. I guess it might have to with the "hardness" of the space which you seek to remedy.
ef
Mark –
All of your sketches and elevations came out looking real good on your blog.
I can’t wait to see the advancement of your project.
Talk to you soon.
Chad
Howdy Mark!
Looking forward to seeing the progression of your "Lantern!" Hope to see your new boards soon!
Mich
Mark,
These graphics look great. I hope you are feeling better. Can't wait to have you back at it. Take care.
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