Too bad you have not called me: the models would have been a great base for a discussion!
Overall you added details to plans, which enriches it but you have not investigated options for the elevator cores as I suggested: I don't think that putting an elevator each into the pods is your best option!
Unfortunately you don't show the space where it is most interesting: the large stairs and path through the center of the building! A study of this area would tell you a lot about how to approach the lower plaza level.
Overall, you have a building, but you have not provided any conceptual drawings that would explain your motivation behind it!
Try to catch up in the remaining days on the site analysis and conceptual boards: these are not just decorum, but are an essential part of the project!
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Mark,
Too bad you have not called me: the models would have been a great base for a discussion!
Overall you added details to plans, which enriches it but you have not investigated options for the elevator cores as I suggested: I don't think that putting an elevator each into the pods is your best option!
Unfortunately you don't show the space where it is most interesting: the large stairs and path through the center of the building! A study of this area would tell you a lot about how to approach the lower plaza level.
Overall, you have a building, but you have not provided any conceptual drawings that would explain your motivation behind it!
Try to catch up in the remaining days on the site analysis and conceptual boards: these are not just decorum, but are an essential part of the project!
Best,
Enno
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